Kieroman's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anonymous Madness]

One tip: any good animation, starts with a good story. If you wish to be good at this, you'll need to start by working on that.

I'm not going to judge you on your animation quality, cause this is your first and I'm sure you'll improve. But you'll find out that having a good story can get you far, even with a not so good animation.

I'm giving you 1 star, but it's not to say give up, it's to say: TRY AGAIN, keep going, get better

And be sure to catch the audience's attention

[Waterlollies]

Amasing: Art, story, detail, music, sounds, animation, quality

Its all just amasing, incredible work

[Good Citizen]

Pure genius, incredibly well made and the message gets through loud and clear

KiWiArts responds:

Yay

[Pumpkin Stop Motion]

THAT is amasing

[Dichotomous]

Anime Team, I completely and uterely disagree with you. An artist does not go to art school to learn how to do art, he goes there to learn how to use the different tools. For an instance, how can you make a 3D animation if you have no clue how to create one? You have to learn how to use the tools, what program to use, etc.

Yes, I agree, the relationship was not portrayed enough, and the art wasn't the best, but it was still a good overall animation. I understood the plot without reading the plot first, which is a good thing. The music was not excellent, but appropriate, the animation was fluid.

Everything falls into place. Its not perfect or incredible, but it's a good quality of work.
If you keep it up, I'm sure you'll eventually come up with something "Amazing", followed by more.

Keep going.

[Mortal Kombat FAILtality2]

Why does Striker and Johnny never die? I hate those two

Also, where is scorpion?

R1665 responds:

"...the good die young... and pricks live FOREVER!"

- Lewis Black

[Pokemon: Evolution]

Give it a backgroung and its a five stars

[Partners in Mime]

Bloody Genius!

[The Minecraft - Matrix]

Shiiiit
Did not exept that.

REALLY well made!

[Peril of the Bells]

I really love your animations, but this was not your best.
The Lalalas were a bit annoying and it just wasn't funny like it usually is.

You know what? I just reewatched it, and I think the real problem is the sounds and voices you used. In the end it was too much noise.